Mounger Writing Center

We're here to support cadets with any part of a communications project, at any stage of your process, as they develop further as a thinker and writer.

Mounger Writing Center

We're here to support cadets with any part of a communications project, at any stage of your process, as they develop further as a thinker and writer.

Great Place for Cadets to Take Their Work-in-Progress

We can always help, no matter where you are in the writing process - whether you're just getting started, analyzing a source, generating ideas and outlining your work, or you're comprehensively revising as you make your final push. We help no matter whether you're a plebe, firstie, or experienced faculty member and regardless of how confident you feel about your writing - whether you're struggling or excelling or somewhere in between. 

Bottom line: We're here to support any cadet with any part of a communications project, at any stage of your process, as you develop further as a thinker and writer. The MWC complements the academic assistance that West Pointers receive from the Center for Enhanced Performance and specialists at the USMA Library by supporting the entire spectrum of cadet writing and communication needs. 

Make an Appointment

In-person appointments are available for booking by all cadets and faculty for feedback on any academic, personal, or professional writing project. 

All sessions are held in person in the MWC (Jefferson Hall, 2nd Floor Northeast). During the 45-minute session, a cadet fellow or contracted professional will do the following:

  1. Review your appointment form and the in-progress writing project you've either uploaded or brought in hardcopy form 
  2. Engage you in conversation about your writing questions and give you feedback on your work 
  3. For cadet clients, send a brief report to your instructor

Contracted consultants are available each afternoon to work specifically with faculty. 

William (Billy) Mounger, Class of '48

In recognition of his generous support and unqualified commitment to the development of more effective cadet writers, the West Point Writing Center (established 2012) was renamed the William D. Mounger '48 Writing Center in October 2016. 

Mr. Mounger admitted to struggling as a writer while at West Point, but in an exemplary account of intellectual curiosity and motivation, he used those struggles to fuel lifelong learning after graduation. This drive, as illustrated in Mr. Mounger's own words below, demonstrates these characteristics for future generations in the Long Gray Line.

"At that time (1950), I determined that I would increase my vocabulary by researching the doubted meaning of any word that I read. Over the years, I have underscored thousands of words, which I have reviewed incessantly, thereby increasing my vocabulary immeasurably. Consequently, I began to read books on etymology and many other publications concerning the origins of the English language. Over time, my original Webster's became so frayed with use that around 1972 my wife, Jan, gave me a new leather-bound Webster's College Dictionary to which I dutifully transcribed from my Plebe Webster's all my previously specified words - that dictionary has also become so tattered that it is now almost unusable."

For more information about Mr. Mounger, his relationship to writing, and his enduring dedication to cadet writers, see the account authored by West Point's Association of Graduates.

Cadet FAQs

Consultants at the MWC help cadets with assignments for any academic course: anything from essays, responses, and research papers to technical or lab reports, abstracts, manuals, and posters, even oral presentations or PowerPoints. Cadets can also make appointments to discuss writing for personal interests or professional opportunities.

Cadets can also find resources for their communication project on our cadet resources page, including guides written by cadets for cadets. 

We aim to engage you in productive conversations about your ideas and how you can express them more clearly, forcefully, and effectively. As a result, we can be helpful to every writer. You probably won’t leave the MWC consultation with a perfect paper, but you will have concrete ideas about how to improve.

The Writing Center is open to all cadets. You can work on assignments for any academic course: anything from essays, responses, and research papers to technical or lab reports, abstracts, manuals, and posters. Consultants also welcome working with you about any writing you're doing out of personal interests or to pursue professional opportunities (like statements for grad school).

The MWC is staffed primarily by Stokes Fellows, along with contracted writing consultants. Cadets are selected as Stokes Fellows on the basis of demonstrated promise as writers, teachers, and communicators. All of them undertake rigorous study of composition pedagogy in formal academic courses.

We limit you to one appointment per day and two appointments for any given assignment. You cannot come in the same day your assignment is due. Also, make sure you cite any session with us according to the DAAW in your final work; sample entries are available on our Welcome Desk.

Ensure your appointment form is accurate and detailed regarding the assignment and your concerns; consider even articulating specific questions you have within the MS Word file you upload of your in-progress writing. For instance, if you're concerned about your thesis, point out in the document itself where or how you think it's lacking. If you're worried about how paragraphs 'flow' or whether your argument stays on track, consider highlighting paragraphs about which you're particularly concerned. Bottom line: help us to see where we should prioritize our limited time and how best to help you.

Another tip: consider bookending your two appointments per assignment so that you come in once early in the writing process and once towards the end of the process. That way, you give sufficient time in between to work on the areas you identified in the first appointment and possibly attend an AI session with your instructor, as needed.

No. We want you to learn to become more skilled readers and revisers of your own writing, and doing the proofreading for you would be a waste of time. 

While we won’t simply edit, 'fix,' or proofread papers, your consultant will point out patterns of error and awkwardness in your writing, especially ones that obscure your meaning, and also guide you to relevant learning resources to consider. 

We recommend that all cadets continue to draw on each other for peer-to-peer proofreading and also enlist proofreading tools embedded in MS Word as well as free online resources (such as Purdue OWL and helpful extensions like those offered by Grammarly). 

Remember you must document revision (formerly "extended proofreading") according to the DAAW (see section II C, p. 9). 

We’ll likely only be able to read and respond professionally to 5-7 pages of double-spaced writing during any given session. If your project is longer, consider uploading only the most essential portions to your appointment form. 

It's important to remember your project is your work, and that Cadet Fellows and contracted consultants are not instructors; we're generalists, not subject-matter experts. We're not here to edit or simply proofread your paper, nor to grade it. 

Instead, we act as informed, critical readers. We're sounding boards for how effectively you're shaping your argument and we look to advise you about general principles of sound writing. 

We'll address higher order concerns of substance and organization as well as 'later order' concerns such as patterns of error or awkwardness in style or mechanics. 

Above all we aim to advance your learning and development.  

Bottom line: we focus on formulating questions, comments, and suggestions that will enable you to improve your own work. 

We’re not ghostwriters, editors, proofreaders, or teaching assistants. That means we won’t write your paper, tell you what to argue, or correct every error for you. 

We don’t know exactly what your instructor wants, and we won’t guess what grade you might receive. 

We also don’t read papers in advance or over email; you’ve got to meet with us in person.

Our goal isn't for you to leave with a perfect paper. Instead, we want you to learn more about yourself as a writer, about the writing process, and about specific writing conventions. 

All of that will help with the paper you come in with but, more importantly, it develops you as a capable writer in the longterm.